I don’t know about some writers but a simple rewrite is never as easy as it first seems to be.
I thought that Carnival would be simple; just some rearranging and working on rephrasing. However, since I wrote the flash piece, I have become more attune to where my conflict lies in the story.
Carnival, as it stands now, has no conflict.
Hopefully, tonight that will change. I have been thinking of how to go about this. How to get the affect of the piece right. I can say that it is much different than the original. I can see the improvements every time I read through it.
I can’t stop tweaking little parts as I go. Taking out a piece and putting in a bit more. I know that I have a few pieces to clarify once it is complete, but I am happy the way this is turning out.
I intended to have this quickly done this weekend. However, I want to do this right, so will be taking as long as it needs.